my favorite film

          

           Have you ever seen this three little girls and this man? If your answer is no,you must see the film immediately. The film is about a man(GRU) and three little girls(AGNES,EDİTH,MARGO).Gru is a man who dreams to steal the moon.You  are shocked,aren’t you?The film continues,the girls and Gru meet.The action begins with this.Gru’s life changes.And he learns that there are a lot of thing to do in the world.He manages to steal the moon.But girl’s life is in danger.So he gives up his dream and saves the girls.Now,they are Gru’s daugters.And Gru is their father.

       I like this movie because it is funny.Whenever I am bored, I watch this movie and laugh a lot.I like Agnes character most.Because she is very sweet.I like her smile and speaking.You must watch it.

Exercise 1

We have a beagle that loves to hunt and we open he back door for her. She barrels down porch steps into the yard and runs back, forth across the lawn in ecstasy. ,Her nose cruises the wet grass for smells of cat,rabbit smells ,and other presences too subtle for human detection. While she sniffs, she spins her tail in quick circles. Firstly, It spins clokwise ,later spins counterclockwise.It always do these activities at the same times. We seem to propel her along.

Exercise 2

The Government Printing Office in Washington D.C. is a source of much useful information There arent many people who know this. İt is the official publishing house of the federal government.The GPO publishes pamphlets and books on a large number of subjects which range from the dangers of X-rays from home TV sets to the identification of mushrooms. About 27000 publications many of which are cheap and some of which are free offered through the Superintendent of Documents.

Exercise 3

The man who reaped America’s first fortune was John Jacob Astor. Astor, German immigrant, made his initial money trading Indian furs. He was lowborn and illererate. Aster never learned to speak English properly so he carried on his business to the end in an accent which was redolent of the Hamburg gutters.

SENTENCES WITH ERRORS	ERROR CATEGORY / CATEGORIES	NAME/DESCRIPTION OF ERROR	CORRECTION
My roommates don't speak with each other.Each one is busy with her.	Local errors	Incorrect word choice Incorrect use of proposition ‘with’	My roommate don’t speak to eachother.Each one is busy with themselves/their affairs.
The other point,maybe for most of us it is a problem, is being have to live without family.	Global  error	Incorrect verb tense	The other point which is probably a problem for most of us is having to live without family.
Anymore we are not child.	Local error	Singular plural error	We are not children anymore.
Anymore my mother isn't with me.	Global errors	Incorrect sentence structure	My mother isn’t with me anymore.
Metu is worth to deal with problems with which we can come across in Metu.	Local errors	Incorrect word form Incorrect use of the preposition ‘with’	Metu is worth dealing with the problems we can come across.